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Evaluate a Recommendation

10 original prompts with writing plans, model answers and space to draft.

Approach this task direction

  1. Identify the actor, the proposed action and the problem it is meant to solve.
  2. Compare two settings in which adopting the same recommendation would have different results.
  3. Explain which features of the settings make the recommendation worth adopting.

Common mistake

A broad list of advantages and disadvantages can miss the task. Show how a particular situation changes whether the recommendation helps.

Practice prompts

Prompt 1 · A Term of Local History

Secondary schools should devote a full term of history lessons to a project about the surrounding community.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Make the length of the project conditional on what pupils can investigate.
  2. Show how several local sources can illuminate a wider historical change.
  3. Explain what a full term would cost a class with limited evidence or time.
  4. Distinguish projects worth a term from enquiries suited to a few lessons.

Useful language

Verbs in context

interpret primary sources · connect local and national developments · allocate curriculum time

Phrases to adapt

  • “A term of local history would be valuable where pupils can investigate …”
  • “The same allocation would be harder to justify if schools lack access to …”
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A familiar building or street can give pupils a concrete reason to ask how their community changed. A whole term of local history, however, needs to offer enough material for those questions to develop. I would devote a term to such a project when pupils have several kinds of evidence to work with and when the enquiry advances the wider history course.

Consider a coastal school whose pupils can examine a harbour ledger, dated photographs and maps showing railway connections. They might ask whether the arrival of a railway changed the kinds of goods that passed through the harbour. The ledger could show a change in cargo, while a map could help pupils decide whether a new rail connection offered a plausible explanation. Later lessons could ask them to compare their account with evidence from another port. A term would give the class time to revise an initial explanation and see how a national development played out in a particular place.

A school with a single anniversary booklet about its town faces a different choice. The booklet might describe the opening of a factory in great detail and say little about its workers. That omission would make a useful lesson in judging the purposes of a source. If the class cannot obtain other records or testimony, devoting the rest of the term to the same project would leave pupils with few opportunities to test the booklet's account against other evidence. The time might be better spent on a topic where they can practise that skill.

The fit with the course also matters. A class studying the expansion of voting rights could use local election material to examine who participated and what candidates promised. If the evidence covers only one election, a shorter enquiry followed by a return to the national chronology would preserve both the local insight and the sequence pupils need to understand.

Schools should judge the length by what pupils can find out and how that enquiry serves the course. A term is justified when sustained work with local evidence deepens a historical argument that the wider course needs.

Show rationale

The essay tests the same proposal against the quality of local evidence and the demands of a wider syllabus. The harbour project demonstrates what a term makes possible, while the school with limited sources illustrates the opportunity cost. The writer supports the full term only when it earns that time through sustained historical enquiry.

Prompt 2 · Recorded Conference Presentations

Conference organisers should offer speakers the option of giving a prerecorded presentation.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. State what the audience needs from different conference sessions.
  2. Show how a recording can improve a technical demonstration.
  3. Use a workshop to illustrate the value of immediate answers.
  4. Decide when a recording can serve as the speaker's full contribution.

Useful language

Verbs in context

broaden speaker access · accommodate scheduling constraints · facilitate live discussion

Phrases to adapt

  • “Recorded talks could widen participation where potential speakers face …”
  • “The option works best when organisers also provide a way for the audience to …”
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A conference speaker can give a useful presentation from a workbench hundreds of miles from the venue. The value of giving speakers that option depends on what participants need to do during the session. I favour offering recordings for talks that convey prepared material. When a session depends on responding to cases raised by the audience, organisers should also arrange for the speaker to join the discussion.

At a conference for museum staff, a conservator could use video to show the repair of a torn map. At her workbench, she could position the camera close enough for viewers to see where the tear crosses the ink. She could film each stage as it happens and then show the sequence in a ten-minute talk. That would give viewers a clearer view than a demonstration from the far end of a conference room. Recording would also let her show the work at different stages without having to transport the map.

At the same conference, a workshop on exhibition labels might ask participants to bring examples from their own museums. Someone might ask how to write a label when relatives give two different accounts of the history of an object. The speaker could suggest wording and then change it when the participant explains why one account has already appeared in an earlier exhibition. If the specialist's contribution is a recording, the chair may have to move on before the group can work through the new information. Participants could hear a general principle and still leave with the problem they came to discuss.

Organisers can match the format to the exchange they want. For a series of prepared reports, the chair could collect questions and circulate the speakers' answers after the event. For a workshop, the speaker could record an introduction and join by video call when participants raise their own cases. The latter arrangement preserves the convenience of recording while giving the group access to the speaker's judgement.

Recordings should be an option wherever the prepared presentation can do the main work of the session. Where participants are expected to shape the discussion, organisers should offer that option alongside a commitment from the speaker to take part.

Show rationale

The essay weighs the same recording option in a technical demonstration and a workshop. It shows how filming can improve what viewers see and why a workshop depends on the speaker responding to new details. Those differences determine when the writer supports a recording on its own and when the speaker should also take part in discussion.

Prompt 3 · Replacing Status Meetings

Employers should replace recurring status meetings with written updates.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Connect the choice of format to what the team needs to accomplish.
  2. Show how a stable publishing schedule lends itself to written updates.
  3. Explain why a redesign can justify regular discussion.
  4. Set a threshold for calling a meeting.

Useful language

Verbs in context

document progress · flag unresolved issues · coordinate interdependent tasks

Phrases to adapt

  • “A written update can replace a routine meeting when team members mainly need to …”
  • “A live discussion remains useful when colleagues must resolve …”
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A team may need to know how much work is complete before it can plan the rest of the week. Often those facts fit into a few lines. I would replace recurring status meetings with written updates when a team is following an agreed plan. Where updates regularly lead to decisions several people must make together, a scheduled discussion can still justify the time it takes.

Consider the team putting together a trade magazine with an established monthly schedule. In a shared update, the production editor can mark an article ready for layout, the designer can flag a page that still needs a photograph and the advertising manager can record a booking that needs confirmation by Wednesday. Each person can refer to the latest information at the point when it affects their work. A proofreader joining later can see who is responsible for an outstanding page without waiting for someone to repeat the discussion from the weekly meeting.

The same team might struggle with written updates during a redesign. The editor wants to add two pages to a feature, the advertising manager has committed the spare pages to two paid advertisements and the production manager needs to meet the printer's page limit. Each person can record that constraint in a note, yet somebody still has to choose which section to shorten or which layout to change. While decisions of this kind recur with each issue, keeping a meeting gives the team a predictable time to test alternatives and agree which changes to make.

A team with a stable schedule could still call a short meeting if a printer unexpectedly brings a deadline forward. The written update could show which pages are ready, so the discussion can focus on which unfinished items can be moved to a later issue. Once that immediate decision has been made, the team can return to reporting progress in writing.

Employers should let written updates carry routine reports and call meetings when the information requires a shared decision. If those decisions have become a regular part of the work, a recurring meeting serves a clear purpose.

Show rationale

The essay compares a publication following a stable schedule with the same team during a redesign. It shows how written updates can carry routine information and why recurring decisions about shared constraints can justify a meeting. The writer uses the frequency of those decisions to limit the recommendation.

Prompt 4 · Overdue Library Fines

Public libraries should abolish daily fines for returning borrowed materials late.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Take a position on abolishing the daily charge.
  2. Show how an accumulating debt might discourage a borrower from returning.
  3. Examine what changes when someone else is waiting for a scarce item.
  4. Explain how return arrangements can support abolition.

Useful language

Verbs in context

abolish daily penalties · remove barriers to borrowing · encourage timely returns

Phrases to adapt

  • “Removing daily fines could help borrowers who …”
  • “For items with long waiting lists, the library could encourage returns by …”
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A library has to make it easy for people to borrow items and possible for the next person to find them on the shelf. A daily fine addresses the second goal by making a delay costly, yet the debt can make an overdue borrower reluctant to come back at all. I favour abolishing daily fines and giving particular attention to returns when a library lends something in short supply.

Suppose a parent borrows several books for a child and misses the return date during a change in work shifts. If each book incurs a separate daily charge, the parent may put off a library visit until the household can spare the money. In that case, the fine could keep the books out of circulation longer while interrupting the child's access to new ones. A reminder that gives the parent a chance to renew unreserved books would serve both the library and the family.

The consequences of a late return are more serious when a branch has a single tablet available for home borrowing. Someone might reserve it to join an online class and find that it has yet to be returned. Abolishing the charge could make it easier for a borrower to put off bringing it back. The branch could make the return date clear at checkout, send a reminder before it is due and pause further equipment loans until the tablet comes back. Those measures would give the borrower both notice and a reason to return it.

Return options matter as much as reminders. An evening book drop would help the parent who cannot reach the branch while it is open. If a tablet needs to be checked in by staff, letting a borrower return it at a second branch might make the difference. Both arrangements address an obstacle that an accumulating charge would leave in place.

The size of the collection and the cost of a delay should shape how a library manages returns. Daily charges can be abolished across the collection, with tighter loan arrangements for items that other borrowers need on a predictable date.

Show rationale

The essay supports abolishing daily fines and takes seriously the possible effect on return dates. It contrasts a family borrowing ordinary books with a queue for a library tablet. The writer explains why the difference changes the return arrangements needed for abolition, while maintaining the same position on daily charges.

Prompt 5 · Projects Across Disciplines

Universities should require every undergraduate to complete a group project with students from another discipline.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Question a universal requirement while identifying when collaboration is valuable.
  2. Develop a project that needs two disciplines to make one decision.
  3. Show how timetabling and an artificial brief can weaken another project.
  4. State when a course can reasonably require the work.

Useful language

Verbs in context

combine disciplinary expertise · coordinate schedules · design a shared task

Phrases to adapt

  • “A joint project is worthwhile when the problem requires students from both disciplines to …”
  • “The requirement becomes harder to justify if the only feasible arrangement is …”
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A university can put students from different disciplines in a room by changing the rules of a degree. It takes a carefully chosen problem to give those students a reason to use one another's expertise. I would require an interdisciplinary project on courses that can identify such a problem and give students time to solve it together. A requirement across every degree goes too far.

An engineering class designing routes into a railway station could work with students in social geography. The engineers might produce a route that meets the brief's requirements for gradient and distance. The geographers could ask where passengers arrive from and draw attention to a crossing that is hard to reach from the bus stop. The engineers would have to alter their design in light of how people use the area, and the geographers would have to consider what can fit on the site. The students would make a shared decision that each group would have approached differently on its own.

A different result is likely if a part-time language course is required to pair students with a daytime business class for a report on a city's shops. A group might split the report into a translated interview and a marketing section to avoid searching for a meeting time. Each half could be competent, yet the students would have little reason to discuss how an interview changes a marketing judgement. The language students would also lose time they could have spent preparing for a sustained conversation in the language they are studying.

A programme could improve that project by asking students to use their interviews to make one recommendation together and scheduling joint work within both courses. It could then assess the group's reasoning by asking how evidence gathered in one language shaped the final decision. This kind of redesign takes coordination. Universities should require the project only where they can support the joint work as part of both degrees.

I favour compulsory collaboration when it develops a skill the course values and students have a realistic opportunity to work together. Where either condition is missing, universities can offer interdisciplinary projects to students whose programmes and interests suit them.

Show rationale

The essay opposes a blanket requirement while showing that interdisciplinary group work can earn a place in particular courses. The station project illustrates an intellectual advantage, and the language course illustrates costs in time and coordination. The writer uses both circumstances to define when participation should be compulsory.

Prompt 6 · Theatre Rehearsals in Public

Publicly funded theatres should open rehearsals to the public.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Identify why seeing work in progress can benefit the public.
  2. Show what visitors could learn from a late technical rehearsal.
  3. Explain how an audience could change an early creative session.
  4. Decide which rehearsals suit public access.

Useful language

Verbs in context

engage local audiences · explain the rehearsal process · protect creative experimentation

Phrases to adapt

  • “An open rehearsal would be most useful when the company is ready to …”
  • “A closed rehearsal may be preferable while performers are still …”
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A theatre audience usually sees a scene change after a company has worked out how to make it happen. Watching a rehearsal can reveal the choices behind that change. I would open selected rehearsals when the company has agreed that visitors can be present and when their presence fits the work planned for that session.

Imagine a theatre running through the lighting for a scene that moves from a crowded platform to a kitchen. In one attempt, the light lingers on the actors leaving the platform. In another, it falls earlier on a figure standing in the kitchen doorway. Visitors could see how the timing of a single cue changes whose arrival they notice. A brief introduction from the lighting designer could give them enough context to follow the trials, and the company could then continue with a change it was already scheduled to rehearse.

An audience would have a different effect during the first week of a new play about siblings sorting a parent's belongings. An actor might want to try making a joke sound harsher and ask the other actors whether it changes how they understand the family. If a room of strangers laughs, the company might start discussing the laugh before the actors have answered the original question. Some performers might also choose the familiar reading of the line because it feels safer in front of visitors. The company would lose some freedom to test and discard ideas.

There are also early rehearsals where visitors would contribute to the work. A company developing a play with audience participation might invite people to try following directions from an actor and ask where they became confused. In that session, an unfamiliar audience helps answer a question the company has set out to investigate. The theatre can explain the visitors' role before anyone takes part.

Public funding gives theatres a reason to make some of their work accessible. They should choose sessions where visitors can learn from the work or take a role that the company wants them to play. Rehearsals that depend on private discussion should remain closed.

Show rationale

The essay treats public access as valuable under specific working conditions. It compares a late rehearsal that can show visitors how stagecraft works with an early session where observation can inhibit experimentation. A participatory production helps refine the position by showing that the purpose of the session matters as much as its timing.

Prompt 7 · Employee Training Allowances

Employers should give each member of staff an annual allowance to spend on a course of their choice.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Explain when staff are well placed to identify training needs.
  2. Trace how one employee might use a course to improve daily work.
  3. Show why a team-wide change calls for coordinated training.
  4. Connect the allowance to shared training and time to study.

Useful language

Verbs in context

allocate a training allowance · assess course relevance · apply new skills at work

Phrases to adapt

  • “A flexible allowance could benefit employees whose roles increasingly require …”
  • “The employer could limit waste by asking participants to show how …”
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Employees often discover what they need to learn while doing a job. A manager who sees the finished work may have little occasion to notice the awkward step an employee repeats every afternoon. An annual training allowance can help staff address those problems. It works best when employers also fund the training a whole team needs and give people time to use their allowance.

Consider an estimator at a print shop who spends several hours a week redrawing diagrams for variations on standard orders. A short course on a layout program could help her make reusable templates that show colleagues where the dimensions have changed before they cut the paper. The owner might have chosen a general customer service course for everyone because the shop receives many enquiries. The estimator knows which drawings delay her work and can choose a class whose exercises address the problem. An allowance gives her a way to act on that knowledge.

Individual choice is less useful when the same shop introduces a system that changes how orders move from the front desk to the press. If one person studies how to enter an order and another continues to write changes on a paper slip, the press operator may work from an earlier specification. The shop needs staff to practise passing the same order through the system together, including what happens when a customer changes a delivery date. Spending the entire training budget on separate courses would leave that need unmet.

The allowance is also worth more to an employee who can make time for a course. A colleague who works a closing shift may find that the relevant classes all meet in the evening. A manager could arrange cover for the hours needed or help identify an equivalent class. The choice of course then depends more on what the employee can use at work and less on the hours they happen to work.

I favour giving each employee a budget where staff have time to study and a shared training programme covers the skills the team must learn together. The allowance can then support needs that differ from one person to the next.

Show rationale

The essay tests an individual allowance against two different training needs. The print shop example shows why an employee may see an opportunity that managers miss, and the software example shows the cost of leaving shared skills to individual choice. These circumstances support an allowance alongside collective training and time to use it.

Prompt 8 · A Stall for a First-Time Vendor

Local market organisers should set aside one stall each week for a first-time vendor.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Make a weekly reservation conditional on demand and space.
  2. Show what a new trader can learn from a one-day booking.
  3. Explain what a fixed reservation could cost a small market.
  4. Set out when organisers should offer the stall and when to release it.

Useful language

Verbs in context

reduce the cost of entry · test customer demand · allocate scarce trading space

Phrases to adapt

  • “A reserved stall lets a new vendor test demand for … before committing to …”
  • “Where stalls are already oversubscribed, the recommendation would be easier to justify if …”
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A person with something to sell may have little chance to try it at a local market if regular traders book the stalls a season at a time. A weekly place for a first-time vendor creates an opening. I would reserve that place where organisers expect a steady flow of newcomers and can spare the space. Where space is scarce, organisers can offer a beginner a stall when a regular trader is taking a week off.

Suppose a large Saturday market has regular customers and often hears from beginners seeking a place. Someone who sews bicycle bags at home could bring a dozen to a reserved stall for one day. Talking to shoppers might reveal that people want straps that fit a particular kind of rack. At the end of the day the vendor would have sales and costs to consider before buying more fabric or applying for a permanent place. The short booking gives a beginner access to real customers at a point when a season-long commitment would be hard to justify.

A small winter market with six covered pitches faces a different calculation. If it holds one pitch for a newcomer each week, a bread seller might lose the spot customers normally visit. During a stretch when few beginners are ready to trade, the reserved pitch could stand empty. Organisers would then collect less rent and shoppers would have one fewer reason to come. The weekly rule would commit scarce space even when nobody could use the opportunity it was meant to create.

Organisers could adapt the reservation to the bookings they actually receive. A larger market might give beginners until Thursday to claim the stall, then offer it to another trader if it is free. A smaller market could advertise openings for confirmed dates when it has a spare pitch. In both cases, publishing the fee and what the pitch provides would let a new vendor decide whether a trial is feasible.

I favour a regular reservation where beginners are likely to use it and the market can absorb the occasional vacancy. When covered space is scarce or demand is intermittent, organisers can keep offering first-time bookings as pitches become available.

Show rationale

The essay tests a reserved stall in a busy market with few openings and in a small market with limited covered space. It explains the opportunity for a new trader and the cost of leaving a stall empty or displacing a regular vendor. Those conditions lead to a weekly reservation where demand is steady and a more flexible offer elsewhere.

Prompt 9 · Feedback on the First Assignment

Secondary schools should give pupils written feedback in place of marks on the first major assignment in each course.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Make the policy depend on what the first assignment is for.
  2. Show how comments could change a pupil's next attempt.
  3. Examine a first assignment that also informs a formal decision.
  4. State when pupils need written comments, marks or both.

Useful language

Verbs in context

identify areas for improvement · apply feedback · defer a grade

Phrases to adapt

  • “Written feedback is particularly useful when pupils can use it on …”
  • “A mark may still serve a purpose if pupils need to know …”
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The first major assignment gives a teacher a chance to see which ideas pupils can use and where they are struggling. Written feedback can make that information usable. I would give comments in place of marks when pupils have another opportunity to work on the same skill and the assignment is chiefly meant to help them learn.

Imagine a geography class comparing traffic on two streets. A pupil has counted vehicles on one street before school and on the other at lunchtime. A mark might show the pupil that the conclusion is weak. A comment can identify what is wrong with the comparison and ask the pupil to use counts taken at the same time of day. If the teacher has scheduled a second round of observations, the pupil can use the comment, revise the conclusion and see what difference the change makes. The first assignment has served a clear purpose even though it carries no mark.

In a short photography course, the first substantial assignment might be the portfolio used to decide whether a pupil can take an advanced module. A teacher could write that a pupil's framing is deliberate and that the series needs more consistency. Those comments could guide future work, yet the pupil may still need to know whether the portfolio meets the published entry standard. If that standard is expressed as a mark against common criteria, reporting the mark and explaining the judgement gives pupils a clearer basis for deciding what to do next.

The usefulness of written feedback also depends on the time available to read it and respond. A teacher could name one change with a clear effect and have pupils try it in class. A course that hands back the first assignment after the class has moved to a different skill gives pupils less chance to turn even a precise comment into better work.

Schools should use comments alone when the first assignment begins a cycle of practice and revision. When the same work also carries a formal decision, a mark tied to shared criteria can serve that decision alongside written feedback.

Show rationale

The essay compares a geography assignment pupils will revise with a portfolio used for entry to a later course. It shows how comments guide improvement in the first case and why a shared mark matters in the second. The writer makes the recommendation conditional on the purpose of the assignment and when pupils can act on the feedback.

Prompt 10 · Equal Playing Time

Community sports leagues should give every player equal playing time.

Task direction

Take a position on the recommendation. Describe specific circumstances in which adopting it would be advantageous or disadvantageous, and explain how those circumstances determine your support.

Writing plan and useful language
  1. Link playing time to the purpose of the league.
  2. Show what equal time offers a beginner during a match.
  3. Examine the effect of exact equality in a competitive division.
  4. Define where equal time should be required and where coaches need discretion.

Useful language

Verbs in context

rotate players · build confidence · sustain participation

Phrases to adapt

  • “Equal playing time is a sensible default in leagues whose main purpose is …”
  • “A more competitive league could justify exceptions when …”
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Time in a match gives a player opportunities that practice alone cannot offer. A pass has to reach a moving teammate, and there is little time to decide what to do next. I would make playing time equal in community divisions set up to teach the sport. Divisions whose players choose to compete at a higher level can give coaches more discretion if everyone knows what participation to expect.

In an introductory basketball league, a child who has just joined may hesitate when a teammate passes the ball. If the coach removes that player each time the score gets close, the child loses chances to practise under the conditions that made the decision difficult. With regular, equal shifts, the coach could ask the child to bring the ball up the court once each period and review what happened afterwards. Other beginners would get similar opportunities to try a role they find difficult. A planned rotation also lets families see that a close match will still include everyone.

A competitive under-eighteen division may attract players who want to learn how teams adapt tactics during a match. Suppose an opponent begins pressing as soon as the ball comes into play. The coach might put two experienced ball handlers on the court together to keep possession, then bring other players back when the opponent changes its approach. An exact playing-time requirement could force a substitution just as the team is trying to solve that problem. A player on the bench might welcome the tactical lesson while still expecting a worthwhile spell on the court.

The league should tell families how it handles playing time before registration. In an introductory division, a coach can plan equal shifts across a short run of fixtures and make up time in the next game when a match ends early. A competitive division can give each available player a meaningful period on the court while allowing the coach to adjust the length of a particular shift.

Equal time should be the rule where the league promises each player the same chance to learn through matches. A league that offers tactical competition can allow unequal minutes and still make a clear commitment to playing time for everyone.

Show rationale

The writer compares an introductory basketball match with a competitive fixture, explaining what a substitution means in each setting. Equal minutes give beginners repeated chances to practise, while a strict requirement can limit tactical decisions in a competitive match. The essay uses the league's stated purpose and players' expectations to set the scope of the policy.